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Feral path, I embody your direction.
Seize me like the plague.
Invade my blood and harness my heart.
Command my aimless mind.
I am your willing servant.

You are my blessed poison.
My hallowed monster and sanctified demon.
My unholy angel.
My corrupt guardian.
You are me.

I am the caged wolf.
The shrieking beast, howling at the moon.
I epitomize your desire, your craving.
I am your brutal thirst for pure agony.
I am the struggle.

The clash of continuance, of survival.  
I am the vestige of pure instinct.
Pure force and pure intensity.
The most authentic of all senses.
A truly sincere version of yourself.

I am you who exists at the bottom of the soul.
I am you who fights for pure pleasure.
I am you who gratifies the sheer force of the conflict.  
I am you who fights for only bloodshed.
The simplest truth is that I am you.

I am, for all purposes now known, pure instinct.
The beast that rides in your soul, the savage inner wolf.
As one you become the Shepard, guiding me like a blacksmith.
We forge the sword of pure will; pure determination.
Together, we create the form of free will and destiny.

Together, we are all, but one.
This is a poem about the purest instincts of ourselves, underneath the exterior. We are natural forms of life, to see that we aren't animals is not a true statement. Beneath it all, we all fight for survival, which is the most raw and pure part of life. 

I would greatly appreciate any feedback on this poem. 

-tuiskulumi

Written to the tune of Gustav Holst's Mars, from the Planets Symphony. 
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Contradictory55 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014  Student Writer
A harsh outline of our truest, deepest selves. I adore it :)
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tuiskulumi Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014
It is the truth. Underneath it all, you are just trying to survive. :P
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Contradictory55 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014  Student Writer
Yup :D
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italianwhovian Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
It's beautiful well done!
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tuiskulumi Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014
Thank you!! 
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italianwhovian Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:)
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